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雅思写作流程图的注意事项
第一,要用好表示顺序的连接词(Sequencing Words)

既然是流程图,就不可避免的要说明过程的各个步骤和先后顺序,在这里,大家要注意几个词。例如,表示过程我们通常用“process”或“procedure”,过程的各个阶段和步骤我们可以用“stage”或“step”来描述。在谈到第一个步骤时我们可以用连接词“In the firstplace”、“To begin with”、“In thefirst stage”等引出。在进入中间的步骤时可以用“Then”、“Next”、“After this/that”等,最后一个步骤可以用“Finally”或“Lastly”。当然,如果有一些平行的步骤我们也可以用“At the same time”、“Meanwhile”等来引出。

以上这些词如果用的太频繁也会使文章显得较为单调,我们可以使用从句的方法使各个步骤的描写自然地衔接在一句话中。例如

When the cleaning is done, the bottles are conveyed to a glass factory wherethey are cut into glass pieces which are then poured into a furnace.

上面的句子用了when/where/which三个连词,就把玻璃瓶回收的三个步骤”cleaning- cutting –heating巧妙地连接在了一起。

第二,要学会使用被动语态

流程图写好的第二个关键是被动语态的使用。流程图表现的是客观的工作流程或事物发展的过程。因此,我们可以尽量避免用“Weshould/must/need to do sth.”的主动语态,改为“Sth.Should/must/needs to be done”这样的被动语态。被动语态和情态动词的恰当搭配,可以使文章显得更具有客观、和学术化色彩。

The production of cement starts in a mixer, where limestone gravel and sand areconverted into a mixture, which is then fed into a crusher. Here the mixture isground into cement powder, and then is passed through a rotating heater.

上文中用到了convert、feed、grind、pass这四个动词的过去分词构造了被动语态,使过程的描写显得非常专业。


考官也醉了的流程图词汇:
produce生产,lay放置,accumulate积累,gather/collect收集,obtain获得,heat up加热,
expand膨胀,bend弯曲,turn off关闭,cool down冷却,disconnect断开连接,spin旋转/纺,
strike打击, compress压缩,release释放, expand膨胀, move/flow流动, accelerate加速,
form形成, press按压, adjust调整, absorb吸收, form形成,process加工, rotate旋转,
chop坎, grind磨(碎)/碾(碎),light点燃, burn燃烧,ignite点燃, reflect反光,turn转,starts开始,
stops结束,records录音, turns up调高, turns down调低,winds缠绕, unwinds解开,revolves旋转
fold折叠,unfold打开,reverse颠倒/倒转,adapt适应,adjust调整,alter改变,cure治愈,disappear消失,
dissolve溶化/解散,exchange交换,expand扩张/膨胀,fade退色,increase增长,promote促进/升职,
reduce减少,renew使更新/使恢复,renovate革新/更新/修复,replace取代,swell肿胀,switch改变,
transform完全改变,vary改变,swap交换,shrink收缩,melt溶解,heal/cure治愈,
form/come into being/take shape形成,produce生产,gain/get/acquire获取,evaporate蒸发,
volatilize挥发,draw提取,recycle回收,extract拔,absorb吸收,collect收集,meet相遇,
be made up of由……组成, be made of由……制成,be made from由……制成, feed on以……为食,
depend on/rely on依赖,release/send out释放,sort分类,separate分开,conveyed运送,
cut into切成,poured into倒入,heated加热,melted into融化成,flows into流入
动词可分成了三类:


固体、液体、气体。

1Solid:
lay
放置,accumulate积累,form形成, press按压
squeeze挤压,adjust调整,rotate/revolve旋转
grind磨(碎)/碾(碎),wind缠绕,unwind解开
fold折叠,unfold打开,reverse颠倒/倒转,fade退色
shrink收缩,draw/extract提取,recycle回收
absorb吸收,collect收集,meet相遇,sort分
separate分开,conveyed运送,bend弯曲,mix混合
combine结合,be baked in the Sun/dry in the Sun晒干

2Liquid:
cool down冷却, move/flow流动;evaporate蒸发,poured into倒入,meltedinto融化成,melt溶解, circulate循环

3Gas:
expand膨胀,compress压缩;burn燃烧, ignite点燃,release/send out释放,heat up加热,be fuelled by以…为燃料(重要)


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 Chocolate Production

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The illustrations show how chocolate is produced.

Summarize the information by selecting and  reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

图表 1

Thediagram explains the process for the making of chocolate. There are a total often stages in the process, beginning with the growing of the pods on the cacao trees and culminating in theproduction of the chocolate.

Tobegin, the cocoa comes from the cacao tree, which is grown(生长) in the South American and African continents and the country ofIndonesia.  Once the pods are ripe and red, they are harvested(丰收) and the white cocoabeans are removed.(移开) Following aperiod of fermentation, they are then laid out(放置)on a large tray so they can dry under the sun. Next, they are placed into large sacksand delivered tothe factory. They are then roasted(烤磨)at atemperature of 350 degrees, after which the beans are crushed (压碎)and separated(分离) from their outer shell.Inthe final stage, this inner part that is left is pressed(挤压)and thechocolate is produced(生成)


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