雅思写作思路必备--大作文（一）

很多同学在准备雅思的过程当中，总会发现自己的作文分数一直上不去。那么，留学监理网的老师就来带大家分析一下应该...



很多同学在准备雅思的过程当中，总会发现自己的作文分数一直上不去。那么，留学监理网的老师就来带大家分析一下应该如何提高雅思大作文的写作能力。

首先，与中考和高考语文考试的作文一样，雅思写作考试的第一步也是非常关键的一步就是审题。如果你的写作分数与你平时练习时的水平出入过大，那么你在考场八成是跑题了。

那么如何审题呢，留学监理网的老师就用《剑桥雅思真题5》Test2的大作文来给大家做一个示范。

本题的题目如下：

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

这个文章考查的是考生是否能就某一事件/观点的好处与坏处进行观点阐述和举例支持的能力。这里，考官并没有让你阐述自己的观点，所以，如果你的开头是这样的：There are many advantages and disadvantages of having a gap year. But I think having a gap year is great. 那么，你的写作分数一定高不了了，因为你审题不清，导致了跑题。

明确了文章的写作目的之后，我们应该快速地进行头脑风暴并写出一个简要的提纲(outline)。我们需要至少想出2个advantages和2个disadvantages。



我们的留学监理网的老师也为大家写出了一个提纲作为参考：

Advantages:

Gain some work experience: improve interpersonal ability--good for the team work

Know themselves better--choose their major according to interests

Disadvantages:

Lose interest in academic work--never go back to college

Safety hazard: accident/car crash/fight/conflict/crime/terrorism接下来，我们就要开始进行写作了。为了更好地帮助大家进行写作，留学监理网的老师给大家提供一些套用句型，请大家仔细学习。

开头：

The advantages and disadvantages of this development / trend / technology / idea will be explored in this essay.

The benefits and drawbacks of this development / trend / technology / plan will be explored in the following essay.

In this essay, I intend to / aim to identify the advantages and disadvantages of this development / trend / technology / idea / plan.

结尾：

Taking all the factors into consideration / account, I am convinced that the benefits / drawbacks of ___________ far outweigh its drawbacks / benefits..

With all aspects carefully considered, I claim that ______________.

最后，我们的老师还为大家写了一篇参考范文，希望可以对大家有所帮助。There is a debate on if young people should be encouraged to work or travel for a year after they graduate from high school and before they go to college. In my essay, both advantages and disadvantages of this notion will be discussed.

One of the advantages of taking a gap year is that it gives the young adults a great opportunity to think what they want to do and in what they are interested. They have been busy with their studies at high schol for several years and never have time to really think about their future. They’ll find out it is crucial for them to set a goal of career development and the first step to do so is to realize what their passion is. Obviously, taking a year travel or work gives those students some time to figure out what path and major they want to choose.

However, those young adults may pursue economic success rather than academic achievement and will never go back to college. Some of them are lack of judgement and will be easily affected by this impetuous society. They believe going to college will not ganrantee a promising future so they would rather start their career as early as possible in order to gain some practical experience and earn some money. What they don’t know is all the high-end professions require good education. If their parents are not aware of their children’s choice, nobody will keep them on the right track. Their future would be unpredictable.

Taking all the factors into consideration, I am convinced that taking a gap year is good for the young adults. But it’s essential for them to go back to college on time; as a result, I advocate that both their parents and teachers should keep an eye on them and give them supports, suggestions and guidance when it’s necessary.

（注：本范文分数约为6.5-7.0）

希望今天的讲解可以给大家起到抛砖引玉的作用。请大家认真研究考题，多进行写作练习。

祝大家取得成功！

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