每年的四级考前，我们都会总结一些写作翻译的“救命资料”帮助已经上过课的同学进行复习，同时帮助“裸考”的...





每年的四级考前，我们都会总结一些写作翻译的“救命资料”帮助已经上过课的同学进行复习，同时帮助“裸考”的同学考前“磨刀”。It is no exception this year.

各位，再叮嘱几句！

作文要背诵到走进考场前的最后一刻。拿到作文务必读三遍，找出体裁、话题和内容要求，尤其是其中的“名、动、形、副”四类词，然后结合背诵的功能句和题干关键词写作文，尽量写背诵过的表达。

以下内容，只要认真掌握，写作翻译就必然提分。但请牢牢记住：“看懂了”不等于“能记住”，“能记住”不等于“会应用”；因此，多动笔背写并仿写才是提升的关键。

记住：多篇作文中重复性表达是复习的重中之重，因为这些词汇、表达或句式可以使用在近十多次考试中，那么，就很有可能再次成为你写译提分的利器。

建议每篇作文和翻译都按照以下方式处理：抄写范文或译文---英译汉—汉译英—对比查错—背写出错之处。

救命的几句功能表达。
In contemporary society, it has become a trendfor a host of individuals to .....
Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it rather difficult/convenient/comfortable/necessary/ beneficial to ...
Taking a look around, we can notice a great many examples like this.

Apparently, this picture/saying/chart/phenomenon can be naturally associated with the significance of .../the negativein fluences of .../ close relation between ...and ..../

If people intend to ...., it is advisable for them to ....
It is ....that (does/do not)enable ...to buildup adequate knowledge, ability, confidence, experience.

As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of.../ negative impacts of ...
As a college student, I am convinced that it isof great/no necessity for youngsters to enhance/ strengthen our quality by .....
Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness/habit

If we try our utmost to do so, the future of ourlife, work and study will be hopeful and promising.

Do bear in mind: ...

五星级必备作文

第一篇：做好小事的重要性（功能句式大集锦）

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You shouldstart your essay witha brief description of the picture and thenexpress your views on the importance of doing small things before undertakingsomething big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

首段：图画描述

（引入图画）This is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: (图画描述：人/物+动作+环境+文字) the youngster/ guy expresses his worries about “disposing of nuclear waste”; to his surprise, his father responds/answers: “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything.”

二段：图画主题+现象+意义

(图画联系主旨) Obviously, this picture can be naturally associated with the importance of doing small things: (主题评论) if youngsters intend to achieve success, it isadvisable for them to begin with little things. (现象概述) In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of teenagers to ignore tiny things in life: cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying dustbins. (相关人+感受) Meanwhile, an increasing number of young people find it rather useless or unnecessary to dealwith these  things.(举例) A case in point is the boy in the picture. However, (意义) it is these small tasks that enable youngsters to build up adequate knowledge, ability and experience. (万能总结) As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of doing small things.

（补充举例2）Taking a look around, we can notice a great many young people like the boy in the picture.

(意义句补充) Doing small thingsbrings us  skills,arouses our enthusiasm/ passion for success,and helps us to make progress.

尾段：观点+建议+展望

(观点：尾段首句万能) As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by doing small things. (万能建议) Thus, we should educate,advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness/habit. (展望1:)Sparing no efforts to do so,we can witness a hopeful and promising future of our life, work and study.(展望2:) Do bear in mind: no small progress, no success. /small progresses lead to a big success.

相关话题词汇：（做好小事是一种优秀品质或正能量，那么此相关的词还有很多，不妨认识一下？说不定这次就考到了）

可持续发展Sustainable Development

美德Virtue

谨慎Prudence

尊老爱幼Respect the Old and Care for the Young

仁义道德Virtue and Morality

挫折与坎坷Twists and Turns

逆境Setbacks

成功无捷径There Is No Shortcut to Success

终身学习Life-Long Study

从小事做起Start from Small Details

人生处处面临选择We Are Always Faced Various Choices

幽默感A Sense of Humor

沟通Communication

身心健康Physical and Mental Health

捐献Donation

人才的素质The Qualities of the Talents

业余爱好Hobbies

爱国主义Patriotism

感谢对手Expressing Thanks to Our Rivals

欣赏Appreciation

关爱True Love

信念Conviction

奉献 Contributions

梦想 Ambitions

勤奋Diligence

耐心Patience

成功Success

机遇Opportunity

挑战Challenge

勤俭节约Thrifty

创新Innovation

拼搏精神The Determined Spirit

奉献精神The Dedication Spirit

自信Self-Confidence

诚实Honesty

谦虚Modesty

奋斗Strive

团队精神&合作Teamwork Spirit &

Cooperation

竞争Competition

实事求是The Fittest Is theBest

社会公德Public Morality

礼貌Politeness

提高个人修养Shaping the Morality

爱心Love

责任Responsibility

美丽Beauty

理解、谅解Understanding

和谐社会Harmonious Society

打好基础的重要性The Importance of Fundamentals/Basic Skills

第二篇：英语学习（万能素材救命作文）

话题：On English Learning

内容要求（提纲）：1. 英语很重要；2. 学习英语中的各种困难；3. 如何学好英语

首段：

(主题句：现象+意义)In contemporary world,English learninghas gained great popularity and it is of great significance for youngsters to learn English well. (调查法描述)Based on a survey, a majority of international organizations or firmsacknowledge that they prefer recruiting employees who can speak English fluently.

二段

However, English learnersmay have a variety of difficulties or troubles in learning. (主题句)For instance, a large number of students have difficulty memorizing words.Frequently, it is also difficult for them to understand the rules of grammar.In addition,though some are good at reading or writing, they cannot express themselves freely in oral English.

尾段

Then, how to get a good command of (学好) this language?I am convincedthat practice makes perfect. Only practice canhelp oneto master the rules of grammar and remember words.And it is also through practicethat one can speak and write fluently,and there is no other way. If we try our utmost to practice English every day, the future of ourEnglish learning will be promising and hopeful. (180words)

相关话题词汇：（与学习相关的词汇也可以用到第一篇的扩展词汇，此外还有很多，不妨认识一下？考到你就爽了）

熟能生巧Practice Makes Perfect

读书的快乐The Pleasure of Reading

拼搏Struggling

放弃 Give Up

应试教育 Test-oriented Education System

面试前的准备Preparation for the Interview

助学贷款Students’ Loans

正确择业 Choosing the Right  Career

能力Ability/competence

创新Innovation

感谢Gratitude

悲观心态Pessimistic Mind

乐观心态Optimistic Mind

失败Failure

知识Knowledge

自律Self-Discipline

无目标的Aimless

珍惜时间Cherishing Time

大学生就业难It’s Difficult for University Students to Look for Job/Difficulty Hunting for Jobs of College Students

失学Dropping Out of School/Leaving School

只注重考试成绩Exam-Oriented Education

死读书Study in a RigidWay/Stressing Only Exam Scores

 

四星级必备作文

第三篇：教育汇报（图表作文）

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitledEducationPays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weeklyearnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chartfirst and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.



首段：图表描述

(引出图表)This is a simple but enlightening chart by US Bureau of Labor: (图表描述万能) in 2010, it had become a trend for doctors, masters and bachelors to earn more money in a week in US--- $1551,$1272 and $1038. Meanwhile, other individuals could not enjoy satisfactory earnings, if they did not receive better education.

二段：主题评论+现象+意义

(图表联系主题)Obviously, this chart can benaturally associated with the importance of education: （图表内容评论）if individuals intend to acquire/ get betterearnings, it is advisable for them to gain higher degrees. （现象）In contemporary America, it is a common phenomenon for a host ofcompanies/ firms/ corporations/ organizations to hire/ employ/ recruit doctors and masters and pay them better salaries. (相关人+感受) And an increasing number of youngstersfind it rather difficult to get better jobs, if they do not get better education. (意义)It is education that enables them to build up adequate knowledge, skills and ability to dealwith important tasks. (总结)As a matter of fact, employeesand employers in large numbers have come to realize the significance of higher degrees.

尾段：观点+号召

（观点）As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by studying hard and getting better degrees. （号召）Do bear in mind: education is or means a worthy investment.

第四篇  2015年12月四级写作真题1：

Directions:In this section, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay commentingon the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make things happen.” You can cite examples toillustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers inlife. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【范文】

This is a simple but enlightening remark: “Never go out there to see what happens,go out there to make things happen.”Obviously, this saying can be naturally associated with the importance of being participants in life.

In contemporary society, it has become a trend for some youngsters to possess great dreams for life, work and study. Meanwhile, a host of teenagers find it exceedingly difficult to achieve success, if they just wait there to see whathappens. A case in point is English learning. It is practice that enables learners to accumulate adequate grammatical knowledge, vocabulary and fluent English. As a matter of fact, intelligent individuals in large numbers have come to realize the significance of being a participant rather than an onlooker.

I, as a college student, deem that it is of vital necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by making impossible missions happen. Accordingly,we should encourage our friends and classmates to take actions immediately to realize their dreams.

第五篇 对我帮助最大的一位同学（开放性作文）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay abouta classmate who has influenced you most incollege. You should state the reasons and write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【范文】

In college, it is a common phenomenon for a host of students to attend classes and participate in activities with their classmates. Meanwhile, an increasing number of teenagers find it quite necessary to learn other classmates’ merits. A typical example is that my classmate, Lee, has influenced me most.

In the first college year, I had a variety of difficulties in English study. For instance, I had trouble memorizing words.Sometimes, it was also difficult for me to understand the rules of grammar. Although I could read and write, I cannot express myself freely in oral English. Then,how to get a command of this language for me? Lee established English Club and invited me to take part in various activities of learning. Now, I am convincedthat practice makes perfect. Lee’s help enables me to master the rules of grammar and remember words. It is also through oral practice with Lee that I can speak and write fluently.

As a college student, I deem that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance our quality by learning from others. Lee has influenced me not only in English learning, and I will also bear in mind his other significant virtues: a strong will, confidence, optimism and diligence.（207words）

牢牢记住：“看懂了”不等于“能记住”，“能记住”不等于“会应用”；因此，多动笔背写并仿写才是提升的关键。

记住：多篇作文中重复性表达是复习的重中之重，因为这些词汇、表达或句式可以使用在近十多次考试中，那么，就很有可能再次成为你写译提分的利器。

建议每篇作文和翻译都按照以下方式处理：抄写范文或译文---英译汉—汉译英—对比查错—背写出错之处。

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