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大智教育集团-济南伟东新都VIP高考英语试题分析学生提供主观题-写作部分学生这篇作文按照全国卷英语评分...





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学生这篇作文按照全国卷英语评分标准属于第四档（16-20）得分16分根据高考英语全国卷I 五档作文（21-25分）要求修改如下：（结合你的写作风格） 

学生的句子：

I felt deligthed when I was in your home.You played with me and told me some cultures of America. 

修改后的句子：

It was delighted for me to play with you and know several cultures of America from you.  学生的句子：

And I think I really not forget your mother]s ice cream that is made by herself.  

修改后的句子： What is more, I believe that I will never forget the ice cream which was cooked by your mother.

 

学生的句子：

I really sincerely grateful your family’s treatment. It makes me feel at home.

 

修改后的句子：It was my honour to have this opportunity to be treated warmly and made me feel at home.

 

学生的句子：

Unluckly , I forget my watch in your home .My watch maybe under your bed.

 

修改后的句子： 

Unluckily, I guessed that my watch must be left at your home which was under your bed.

 

学生的句子：

You know, a red watch And if you find my watch, please send it to me. I’m thankful your help. 修改后的句子：

I was sorry to bother you to help me figure out my watch whose colour is red and I would be appreciate it if you do me a favor.  学生的句子： By the way, I hope that if you have spare time in next vacation. I sincerely invite you to visit China. 修改后的句子：

And finally , you could contact with me if you have spare time.Nothing is more enjoyable than to play together with you .

 

讲师点评：

1，汉语思维写作模式明显。

2，重复使用词的频率较多，重点副词拼写不完整，常用链接词不准确。

3，汉语时态的模式，英语时态语态的模式运用不熟练。

4，五档作文要求的重点语法，重点句型，特殊句型不明确。

5，高考英语写作词汇，常用词组，掌握不够丰富。仅仅停留在中考英语的用词。

 

优化方法：

1，熟悉高考英语要求的常用链接词汇。

2，熟悉高考英语常用词组，38句高级句式汇总。

3，熟悉亮点50例句。

                      

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