【2016安徽中考英语写作预测范文】第一波~

【2016安徽中考英语写作预测范文】第一波——卫生与健康~中考樱花们速速来动笔写一写~笔头子不能停喔~...





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今天的范文是由滨湖校区的陈雨老师给大家总结的，主题是“卫生与健康”。

你身边有人抽烟吗？请写一篇小短文说明抽烟的害处。要求80词左右。

提示：

1. 抽烟的坏处:

•  抽烟的人头发和衣服有难闻的气味；
•   他们的牙齿和手指会变黄；
•   抽烟的人更可能患上心肺疾病；
•   抽烟会危害到自己周围的人。

2. 戒烟的好处: 有益身体健康；节省开支。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

✎ 写前思考

How to express them in English?

1. 危害健康

2. 浪费钱财

3. 头发和衣服会有难闻的气味

4. 引发心肺疾病的可能

5. 牙齿、手指会变黄

6. 危害自己周围的人

✍ 对照翻译

1. smoking is bad for health


2. a waste of money

3. terrible smell in one's hair and clothes

4. may cause heart and lung diseases

5. have bad/yellow teeth and fingers

6. smoking is bad for the people around youEveryone knows smoking is bad for health. It's also a waste of money. People who smoke too much may not live long. Many people die from smoking each year.

Smokers have bad teeth, yellow fingers. Their hair and clothes may smell terrible. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. Smoking can easily cause heart and lung diseases.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it's also bad for the people around them, too. Giving up smoking is good for health, and can save a lot of money. I hope all the smokers can give up smoking.

Everyone knows smoking is not only bad for health, but also a waste of money. People who smoke too much may not live long, because many people die from smoking each year.

Smokers have bad teeth, yellow fingers and terrible smell in their hair and clothes. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. What's worse, Smoking can easily cause heart and lung diseases.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it's also bad for the people around them, too. Giving up smoking is good for health, and can save a lot of money. I hope all the smokers can give up smoking so that we can have fresh air again!

之前的1.0文章句与句之间，缺少连接词，句子独立缺少联系。2.0作文看蓝色的补充部分，润色作文。

1. 做运动；锻炼身体 take some exercise

2. 对……有害 be harmful to; do harm to; be bad for

3. 身体好 be in good health

4. 健康的饮食 a healthy diet

5. 感冒 catch/have a cold（前者强调动作，后者强调状态）

喉咙痛 have a sore throat

肚子痛 have a stomachache

发烧   have a fever

牙痛   have a toothache

头痛   have a headache

6. 这是一种保持健康的好方法。It’s a good way to keep healthy.

7. 多吃水果蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品 eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food

8. 早睡早起，身体倍儿棒 go to bed early and get up earlyin order to be in good health健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面的信息提示写一篇短文，首句已给出。

信息提示：

1. 健康饮食；

2. 早睡早起，不熬夜；

3. 参加运动，强身健体。

要求： 1.根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译。

2. 字数在80词左右。

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don't feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.


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