【2016安徽中考英语写作预测范文】第二波~

即将中考的樱花们，上周六推送的【2016安徽中考英语写作预测范文】第一波，看得怎么样，这周的“人物描写”篇来啦！快来看看吧！...





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今天的范文是由汇金&丝绸校区的匡云云老师给大家总结的，主题是“人物描写”。

[2015黄冈市中考真题]

用微笑播撒阳光，用行动践行梦想，用一种无形的精神力量感染着身边的每一个人，为同学们树立了一个个积极向上的榜样——这就是“阳光少年”。

某中学自开展“向阳光少年学习”的活动以来，我们的身边涌现了许许多多的“阳光少年”，请你以“A Sunshine Teenager”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你身边的“阳光少年”（假如这位阳光少年名叫XiaoHui）。

要点提示：

1.诚实善良、团结友爱、乐于助人；

2.热情、活泼、开朗、乐观向上；

3.热爱劳动、不怕困难、心怀感恩，积极为父母、师长分忧；

4.勤奋好学，积极参加各种文体活动。

参考词汇： friendly; be ready； warm-hearted； outgoing; active; housework; be afraid; share; take an active part in;

写作要求：

1.词数不少于90（开头已给出，不计入总数）;

2.内容完整，语言流畅，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；

3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。

✎ 写前思考

樱花们，思考片刻再下手：

1. 审---时态+人称：一般现在时+第三人称为主；

2. 列---要点齐全：4+n (适当补充一点)；

3. 写---完整的句子+连接词。

OK，让我们看一下这道话题的范文1.0版本~~普通版：

My school, No.1. Middle School, had an activity “Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”. So we found that there are many sunshine teenagers in our school.

       Xiao Hui is one of them. He is honest, kind and always ready to help others. He is also very warm-hearted, outgoing and active. He loves doing all kinds of works. He helps his parents do housework like cleaning and washing at home. At school, he is also helps his teachers. He is never afraid of difficulties and always faces them with courage and wisdom. He is not only good at study but also takes an active part in all kinds of activities.

      He is a sunshine teenager and we all like him.进阶版：

Our school, No.1. Middle School, had an activity “Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us.

Xiao Hui is one of them. He is honest and kind. He gets on well with others. He is always ready to not only help others but also go to the old people’s homes to do something for the olds. He reads newspapers for them, cleans their rooms and washes their clothes. Also, he is warm-hearted, active and outgoing. He always shares all kinds of his parents’ housework, like doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and making dinner. He is never afraid of different difficulties. He works very hard and he likes reading. And he takes an active part in all kinds of sports. After school, he plays football with his teammates. And he joins the school clubs, like music, art and chess. He learns a lot from all these activities.

Xiao Hui is such a good model that we should learn from him.

普通版仅仅按照字面意思翻译，没有增加拓展的内容，且连接词缺乏。


进阶版中绿色为增加的内容，红色为连接词，黄色为增加文采分的词组。

外貌描写：tall 高的； medium size 中等身材；thin 瘦的；fat 胖的；beautiful, good-looking 美丽好看的；long straight hair with big eyes 长黑发，大眼睛；（介绍外貌时候可用上定语从句，开篇就亮点。）

性格描写：kind 善良的；patient 耐心的；strict 严厉的；friendly 友好的；clever but careless聪明但是粗心的；outgoing 外向的；quiet 安静的；honest 诚实的；humorous 幽默的；

描写爱好：be ready to do sth. 乐于做某事; be good at = do well in 擅长于; love/like doing sth. 喜爱做某事 enjoy doing, be fond of, be crazy about, be interested in , prefer to do/doing

评价：be popular with , be respected by, be honored as, be considered ad, be famous for, be regarded as, set a good example等。

请以 My Real Friend 为题写一篇作文。

提示：朋友，是思想上值得依赖，情感上可以依托，学习上能得到帮助，生活上给予关照的人。请写一、两件事情来讲述你和朋友之间真挚的友情。

要求： 1、请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；

2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；

3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

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Everyone needs friends. Friendship plays an important role in our lives. Friends can encourage us to be better and we can share our hopes and dreams. Amy is a real friend of mine who is like this.

When I became a middle school student, I don't do well in English or math. I fell behind others. I was worried and upset. At that time, Amy often lent me her notebooks and came to my house to help me after school. When I wanted to give up, she always encouraged me to hold on. Thanks to Amy, a month later I caught up with others. Now both of us are in Grade 9, we have the same dreams - to be a student in a good university. I believe we can achieve our dreams.

A friend in need is a friend indeed. Amy is such a good friend who I will cherish forever.


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