四六级冲刺(写作篇 第二讲)写作万能公式

 

Joe老师四六级写作篇第二讲

高分范文分析与写作公式...



Joe老师 四六级 写作篇 第二讲
高分范文分析与写作公式





高分范文分析
No Shortcut to Learning


2014年 12月 六级真题(2)

Given is astimulating(替换词原则!注意这里用了”stimulating”而没用”Interesting” 和 ”funny”! 在这一原文语境下,stimulating不光表达了“趣味性”还有“吸引人眼球”之意 butthought-provoking(高级表达!名词性合成词!没有直接用单一的形容词,译为“发人深省的”上一讲给大家说过,“学问越好的人名词的使用频率越高!”请复习上节内容!)cartoon, in which a young man asks where he can find a book named How To Do Well In School Without Studying, and the woman suggests him to find it in the fiction section. Apparently, the cartoonironically demonstrates(替换词原则!并没有用”describe”, ”express”和”show”!“demonstrate”有“阐明,阐述”之意,更具备立体感!)a truth that there is no such a thing as a shortcut to learning.

It is the nature of study that requires asolid (替换词原则!并没有用strong或者stable!)foundation, Just as we cannot builda castle in the air(俚语的使用!“空中楼阁”的表达!), neither can we obtainadvanced(替换词原则!并没有用good, great! Advanced更高端!《牛津高阶英汉词典》中的“高阶”就是用“Advanced”这个词翻译的!高大上吧!) knowledge through a shortcut, for even aslight(替换词原则!并没有用small, tiny,little!) shortcut canshatter(替换词原则!并没有用break!)the whole foundation. For example, students may choose to cheat to acquire a good score. However, the cheaters willwind up in(厉害吧!“wind up in”表示“以... ....而告终”。 没想到wind也有动词词义吧,其实《牛津高阶英汉双解词典 第七版》中,光wind up这一个短语就有四种用法之多,此处为第一种用法!这种东西是用“有道词典”学不到的!论什么叫功底!) a total ignorance, let alone dishonesty. In addition, although many students are averse to(替换词原则!这里并没有用don’t agree!) learning by rote(名词性原则!非谓语动词的熟练使用!没有直接用动词!详情参见上一讲,“Joe老师写作高分三法宝”), there is no denying that only by rote can one remember and learn the basic knowledge, thus achieving the possibility to further(“Joe老师写作高分三法宝”中的第三条!“万不得已非要用动词时,也要用‘使意动词’,像戒掉毒品一样戒掉‘make/get/let+ adj’的结构!” 详情参见上一讲!) study in the future. In this case, shortcuts also do not exist.   To sum up(替换词原则!并没有用In a word, In conclusion... ... “To sum up”, 读起来更有力量!像是雷厉风行的男子汉说的话。), students should come to realize that there exists no shortcut in study. Only by hard work can weform the bedrock of(替换词原则!表示“打基础”,前文用了“solid foundation”而此处用了“form the bedrock”! 请参见上一讲的“JOE语录”——“一个词尽量别出现第二次!”) good performance in school.


万能公式

(全都是套路)
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表述观点

观点的用词:attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组:Take,

have, come up with,set forth,  put forward等。

But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly

advocate that..,.

不过,另一方面,也有少部分人坚持认为_______________。

But people who are …, on the other hand , maintain that…

不过,另一方面,________的人认为__________。

However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view

concerning this case.

然而,很多人对此有不同的看法。

问题用词:Issue, phenomenon,后接介词, on, over等。

However, some others argue that… 然而,另一些人则认为

_________。

However, there are also some others who contend that...

然而,也有人认为__________。

But other people set forth completely totally different argument concerning

this case.

不过,对于此,另一些人则持完全不同的观点。

Some people examine this issue from another angle.

有的人用另一角度来看这一问题。

On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly …

另一方面,也有很多反对的人,他们认为_____________。

According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer … rather than…

根据我的个性以及兴趣,我选择_______而不会选择__________。

Personally, I side with the latter (former) opinion…

就我个人而言,我支持后者(前者)___________。

Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.

就我个人而言,我较同意前一种看法。

When it comes to …, most people believe that …, but other people regard

…as ….

提到_________问题,很多人认为_________,不过,一些人则认

为______是____.

When faced with…., quite a few people claim that …., but other people

think as…

提到_________问题,仅少数人认为________,但另一些人则为

_________。

At present, some people think ….while others claim …Both sides have their

merits.

目前,一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实,两种

观点都其可取之处。

People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.

对于这种极具争议的话题,我们很难作出绝对的回答。
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结尾句模板

1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________.

2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. for another, ______________.

3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above.

4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________.

5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________.

6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________.

7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future.

8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________.

9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.

10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________.

11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________.

12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________.

13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.

14. Personally, I believe that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.

15. In my opinion, all of the people should be brave enough to show our disapproval and criticism when confronted with ______________.

16. People are coming to realize the importance of ______________. They have begun to try their best to ______________. We believe that ______________.

17. All in all, we cannot live without ______________ . But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with problems that would arise.

18. Whatever you do, please remember the saying- ______________. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it.

19. With the development of society, ______________. So it’s urgent and necessary to ______________. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

20. It is difficult to say whether ______________ is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of ______________. However, from a personal point of view I find ______________.

21. It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.

22. It is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of ______________.

23. But both ______________ and ______________ have disadvantages. For example, ______________. Which to choose, ______________ or ______________? Careful consideration is necessary before you make your own choice.

24. From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ______________.

25. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of ______________ is grievous, if allowed to proceed, will certainly lead to ______________.

26. No doubt, if we ignore the problem, there is every chance that ______________ will be put in danger.

27. We need to take a second look at the matter from a wider standpoint, otherwise, we won’t ______________.

28. It is high time that ______________. Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately. 29. In conclusion, we should know about the problem of ______________, and object to ______________. Only in this way ______________.

30. Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. The most import is ______________. Another way is ______________. Still another one is ______________.

31. Many solutions are offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth.

32. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of ______________. But the common recognition of the importance of ______________ might be the first step on the right way.

33. It is clear, therefore, that the task of ______________ demands great attention.

34. We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.

35. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way. Because I believe ______________.

36. We all know the story of ______________. this lesson tells us that ______________, we should ______________.

37. My own point of view is that ______________ is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that ______________. As an old saying goes, ______________.

38. If we can’t take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is ______________.

39. However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future. I believe ______________.

40. From the graph it is evident that ______________.

41. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in ______________. And I believe that ______________.

42. Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ______________.

43. For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that ______________.

44. Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that ______________.

45. Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.

46. Recognizing the fact that ______________ should lead us to conclude that ______________.

47. In short, I support the statement that it is better to ______________ because ______________.

48. After pondering this question on many occasions, I have finally reached the conclusion that ______________ is something I truly want to do and it is worthwhile.

49. My point of view in ______________ largely results from the fact that ______________.

50. Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that ______________.

51. From what has been discussed above, you can get your preference. Personally, I think ______________ has more advantages.

52. On the one hand, it has helped china ______________. On the other hand, it has increased china’s ______________, and at the same time, made great contributions to our national development.

53. In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to tackle this question is ______________. Another way that is worth adopting is ______________.

54. As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.

55. For me, ______________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into feasible consideration.

56. As regards me, I tend to pick ______________, for ______________. What’s more, ______________.

57. If I were given a choice between ______________ and ______________, I would certainly prefer ______________. For me, ______________.

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问题讨论型模板

问题的常用词:question, problem, issue

Recently, the issue of …… has been brought into public focus.

近来,_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。

Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people’s attitude towards some traditional practice.

现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代,很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。

Recently the issue of whether or not … has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.

近来,是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。

The issue whether it is good or not to …. has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.

______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。

People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.

不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。

The controversial issue is often brought into public focus. People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.

这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。

When asked …, some people think….. while some prefer…

说到______,有人认为________,而另一些人则认为__________。

Just as the saying goes: “so many people, so many minds”. It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person.

俗话说,“”。不同的人对此有不同的看法是可以理解的。

To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.

对于这个问题,不同的人持不同的观点。

There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that…

万事万物都有其两面性,所以,勿庸置疑,____________。

There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of …. There who criticize …argue that …., they believe that …,but people who favor .., on the other hand, argue that…

目前,_______问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为_______,他们认为_______,不过,另一方面,赞同_______的人则认为_________。

Some people are of the opinion that..

有些人认为_____________。

Many people claim that…

很多人认为_____________。

A majority of 绝大多数       A large number of 很多人

Some people contend that … has proved to bring many advantages (disadvantages)

有些人认为________有很多有利之处(不利之处)。

Those who argue for … say that …economic development of the cities.

觉得_____的人认为,______ 城市的经济发展。

Some people advocate that ….

有些人在坚持认为_________。

They hold that … 他们认为_________。

People, who advocate that …, have their sound reasons (grounds)

坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据)。

Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it.

那些从中受益的人对此大家褒奖

Those who strongly approve of … have cogent reasons for it.

强烈认同_______的人有很多原因。

Many people would claim that…

有人会认为___________。

People who support … give some or all of the following reasons.

那些支持_________观点的人列出了如下原因:________。

But others hold the view that …但是,另外一些人则认为_______。

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that….

随着社会的不断发展,出现了越来越多的问题,其中之一便是____________。

As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.

然而,对于此类问题,人们持不同的看法。

Hold different attitudes

持不同的看法(观点、态度)

Come up with different attitudes

有不同的看法。

As society develops, people are attaching much importance to….

随着社会的发展,人们开始关注…………

People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting

求职的过程中,人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。

As to whether it is worthwhile ….., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.

关于是否值得___________的问题,一直以来争论不休。当然,不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。

In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.

在都市的发展中,我们往往会陷入困境。

Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that….

最近,这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注,有人开始担心______________。

The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.

人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段,经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快,随之给我们带来了很多问题。

…… plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?”

_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题,这是无可厚非的。不过,问题是:“我们该如何抉择?”

Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,

现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。

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