【朗阁英语】为什么很多考官会觉得你的口语答案是背的？

为什么很多考官会觉得你的口语答案是背的？朗阁的小编告诉你答案。...

很多同学在口语part2的备考中比较喜欢提前写好答案，背一下。

也有同学喜欢编好一个故事后，尽量套在不同的题目上。

这些同学都担心自己被听出来是编的，所以他们会花很多时间去思考怎么看起来是“现场讲的”，比如说，故意吞吞吐吐的，故意放慢速度等。

然而，不管怎么努力，最后考官还是听出来是背的。他们可能会提前打断学生，加问1-2个问题，来看你的应对表现。

考官会直接问

“I have heard of this story before,have you ever shared this story with others?”

很多同学因为表达能力局限于背好的内容，遇到这种问题马上就乱了分寸。

最后，进入part3这个针对part2细节提问的部分，同学就答不上来了，基本口语也就砸了。到底是哪里露马脚了呢？

1.回答的第一句话或者头几句话和题目不相关

2.过分依赖一些连接表达，衔接生硬

3.用词不恰当，过分正式，不符合语境，不自然

4.内容跳跃，突然出现一些背好的表达

5.使用词伙的时候，没有解释，前后不匹配

6.时态错误，导致事情描述的时间段不合理

7.中间描述故事的重心、细节和题目没有太大关联，没有题目中的关键词

下面我们来举一个栗子：

这个是2016年5月新题，9月的part2真题：

描述一个你的积极改变

Describe a positive change in your life.

You should say:

What the change was;

when it happened;

How it happened;

And explain why it was a positive change

What the change was:

观点：早起，上班不迟到

拓展：我是一个上班族，每天需要8：30到公司，但是上班高峰期经常堵车，经常迟到

I felt delighted to form some good habits of getting up early in the morning and being punctuare in the workplace.I am an office worker,which means I need to arrive at my company before half past eight,but because of traffic jams in the morning rush hour,I was always late.

点评：



问题1--不扣题|第一句话不扣题，不出现关键词



小标题问的是what the change  was,一定要提到的就是你的改变，而不是你有一个早起的习惯，你喜欢在工作中早到。这就是不扣题。

考官非常清楚你是从当季的其他话题，比如说描述一个早起的经历（describe an occasion you got up extramely early）中套用过来的


问题2--过分利用连接表达，衔接生硬



which means连接了前后两部分内容，但非常牵强，office worker就要早到？这很容易被考官认为是一个提前准备好的套句，而并不是在考场上顺着思路说下去的内容



When it happened:

观点：是今年6月份

拓展：公司来了一个新员工，每天都早到，而且工作认真

Something changed because of a newly recruited colleague.She was hired this June and could work hard.To my suprise,she was never late for work and always showed her passion to her jobs.

How it happened:

观点：我向她请教，她跟我说，她每天都会有早起的习惯，并且会在早高峰之前就出门

拓展：她不会选择自己开车，因为如果堵车了就会进退两难

Out of curiosity,I consulted her,and she told me that it was her habit of getting up early in the morning that allowed her to have a better work performance the whole day.She chose to avoid the peak hour and try to take public transport rather than drive to the workplace.

点评：


问题3--用词不恰当，过分正式，不自然



out of curiosity太模板化

I consulted her在这里用的不自然。Consult表示向专家，长辈请教，和同事谈话一般用talk to her就可以了


问题4--内容跳跃，突然出现一些背好的表达



it was her habit of getting up early in the morning that allowed her to have a better work performance the whole day

这句话意思是说，早起让她有了一个更好的工作表现，问题是早起只能早到，和工作表现没关系，考官会认为a better work performance 是一个提前准备好的词伙，或者是从其他准备好的故事里套过来的。这样的“思维跳跃”会让考官眉头一皱，觉得你的回答不够连贯。正常的思路是，她能够早睡早起，有更多的精力去工作，所以让她的工作表现更好。And explain why it was a positive change

观点：我开始转变自己对待生活的态度，开始健康的生活方式

解释：以前总是抱怨交通问题让我迟到，被扣工资

拓展：现在能够适应环境，能够更好的利用早上的时间，乘坐地铁更加省钱，因为错开了高峰期，地铁不是那么拥挤，有时间在地铁上看一下新闻，听半小时英语

I started to change my own attitudes toward my work and life,and also tend to lead a healthy lifestyle.I used to complain other factors like transport congestion,which may result in lateness and salary deduction.But now,I could adapt to working environments and take advantage of my commuting time in the subway,where I could read some newspapers and listen to English radios.Actually,the early metro was not packed with people and I also saved money on fuel.

点评：


问题5--使用词伙的时候，没有解释，前后不匹配



I started to change my own attitudes toward my work and life,and also tend to lead a healthy lifestyle.这句话里面突然提到了change one`s attitude towards life前面没有提到，也没有解释，因为这件事情，人生观都改变了，考官怎么听都觉得很奇怪。

词伙lead a heathy lifestyle很多人都用，它不仅仅指早起，还有饮食，运动，所以用在这里不恰当。


问题6--时态错误，导致事情描述的时间段不合理



the early metro was not packed with people and I also saved money on fuel之前说我有了一个积极的改变，那么现在描述的就是改变后的状态，是现在发生的事情，应该用现在时。这个地方的早班地铁没有人挤，我也存钱这些事应该用一般时态而不是用过去时。

What the change was:

The change I`d like to talk about is the habit of getting up early in the morning an showing up for work on time.I am an office worker,and I need to arrive at my company before half past eight,but because of traffic jams in the norning rush hour,I was always late.

1.扣题the change I`d like to talk about

2.并列句衔接，衔接自然

When it happened:

I wasn`t to find a solution to this problem until a new colleague joined the company.She was hired this June and worked hard.To my surprise,she is never late for work even though she lives far away from the office.


3.扣题I wasn`t able to find a solution to this problem until暗示了possitive change的发生

How it happened:

Out of curiosity,I talked to her,and she told me that it was her habit of getting up early in the morning that allowed her to avoid the rush hour traffic and arrive at the office before everybody else.She also tried to take public transport,catching the first train,rathe than drive to the workplace,because there is a lot uncertainly over a car journey,such as car accients,road construction.

4.口语化表达talk to her

5.能够早起的好处是比别人早到arrive at the office before everybody else

6.用car accidents和road construction来具体化a lot of uncertainly

And explain why it was a positive change:

I have basically followed her advice.But now,I have developed good bedtime routine.I go to bed before 10 and wake up before 6.I no longer need to set an alarm.Daily commuting is also more enjoyable.On the subway,I could read some newspaper and listen to English radio programmes.Acutally,the early metro is not packed with people.

7.开头说明了积极地改变I have basically followed her advice

8.词伙用的恰当develop good bedtime routine,早起的好处是睡眠作息时间，后面用I go bed before 10 and wake up before 6.I no longer need to set an alarm.

9.时态使用正确

所以，虽然很多时候，考官对你微微笑，但你的举手投足间暴露了太多不是现场准备的痕迹，用词伙，逻辑跳跃的问题，考官都会发现.

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