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雅思备考传统关键词

素材   模板   词汇  语法

范文   批改   习作  预测

结构   审题   论据  论证

论点   段落   速度  句型

学了很久还是不提高的原因

1、论点高度不够，论据深度不够，论证严密度不够（素材不给力）；

2、很多题目没有思路，只有考完才知道（素材匮乏）；

3、想的挺好，写的不好（词汇、语法和翻译3大内功虚透了）；

4、墨迹，墨迹，墨迹（你不是一个干净利落的汉子，男汉子女汉子都可以，不是说外表，是说内在。）

永甲老师翻译范例

贫穷的人是不幸的！

Having no access to wealth or beingfinancially deprived, one is more likely to lead a miserable life.

Poor（形容词作定语表前提）people areunlucky.

If one is economically deprived（原因状语从句表前提）,one is more likely to suffer from misfortune.

Having no access to wealth（非谓语动词结构作补语）,one may have no access to happiness, either.

翻译的本质

词汇匹配：1.各类词

结构识别：2.从句？3.非谓语动词结构？

语序调整：定语和状语；4.介词短语

案例

经典案例（《剑11》Test 3）

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Discuss both these views and give your ownopinion.

一些人说，学习一门外语的唯一理由就是出去旅行或工作，而另外一些人则认为这些并非唯一原因。

讨论双方观点并给出你的观点。

Many may say, and I agree, that today’s society has almost erased all its boardersand soon will become limitless in what concerns travelling for both work and pleasure.Therefore,if this is to happen, then learning a new language isnecessary. (48 字)

Nowadays, learning a new language for the purpose of working in other countries seems to become more and more popular.（主题句）Adults in need of money or, why not, recognition（后置定语表子条件）are trying to pursue their happiness far away from home（主干表主条件）.Also, the hey days of employers looking only for capable people have gone（简单句单句表条件）.It seems that today’s employers are looking not only for multi-skilled employees, but they also want people who know more than their mother tongue.（条件句解释延伸句）Sooner or later（时间表强调行衔接）,those who omitted learning more are prone to become jobless. (简单句整句表对比)

However, to my mind, a new language shouldn’t be learned just for travelling or working in a foreign country. A foreign language should help the learner broaden his mind（主题句解释句）.By this I mean that the new language（主语表前提）shouldand will allow us to understand more about the world itself（宾补表主前提之一）,and maybe our ancestors’ ways of thinking and acting.（并列省略式宾补表主前提二）Needless to say, knowing another language will help us when it comes to understanding the human race, because language is the first poem of a country.（首尾呼应之尾主题句）

All of this being said, I believe that learning a different language should be not only for satisfying our physical needs, like money, but also our moral needs, because never before had such a big thirst for knowledge been a display.

总结

7分语言的特点是什么？——高效

语法和词汇使用准确而多样（4大结构）；

一定量的地道表达必不可少（heydays）；

可以为论证论点论据等意义层面的高分要素很好的服务（最大化地服务于连贯和衔接）；

一定量的抽象名词必不可少——批量分类积累；

一定量的动词及动词短语必不可少——批量分类积累；

一定量的形容词必不可少——批量分类积累；

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