【英语写作】怎么写好演讲稿
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞等。发言稿总是以第一人称的口吻写，开头往往有称呼语，如“Boys and girls”...
常见的致辞开头：
1.欢迎辞：(1)It’s my special pleasure to welcome...(2)It’s really an honor for me to give a speech here.
2.开幕辞：(1)Welcome, everybody. Thanks for coming to our ...to celebrate this happy event.
(2)Merry Christmas, everyone. I’m more than glad to see all of you here to...
3.欢送辞：（1）We enjoyed every minute you spent with us.
(2)Time flies and we have to say goodbye because you are going back to...soon.
4.答谢辞：(1)Words can’t express how grateful I am to you all.
(2)I want, first of all, to thank you all for inviting me to...
考生在写作时要能够使文章内容完整、要点齐全，用具有感染力和号召力的语言。以下口诀可以帮助考生进行写作：
先读提示，要点与格式要弄清；
时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；
文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视。
典例展示
假设你是某中学的学生李津。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,你欲参选， 请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。竞选职位：学校英语俱乐部副主席
个人优势: （1）性格外向、与人相处融洽
（2）善于组织各种活动
中选后决心：协助主席，服务同学
中选后设想：举办讲座、英语晚会、英语演讲比赛等活动来提高同学们的英语水平，激发大家的学习兴趣
表达愿望：希望同学们投票选你，相信你能干好工作
参考词汇: 副主席—vice president 竞选—run for
注意： 1．词数不少于120；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Jin.
Thank you.
思路构建:
本篇书面表达属于应用文中的演讲稿。李津将选举新一届副主席，要求考生以李津的名义写一篇竞选演讲稿，写作要点要包括：竞选职位，个人优势，中选后决心，中选后设想，表达愿望。文章可分四段来写：
第一段：自我介绍个人竞选优势，竞选职位；
第二段：中选后决心和设想；
第三段：表达自己被选上的愿望；
第五段：结束语(已给出)。
学生习作
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Jin. Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club. About this position, I feel qualified for the job for I am outgoing. I get on well with others and am skilled at organizing many activities.①If I might be the vice president, I will try my best to help the president and serve my fellow students.②I will try my best to improve our English and make more students interested in English.③I intend to organize some activities like lectures, English parties, English speech contests etc.
I sincerely hope that you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good vice president.
Thank you.
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Jin. Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club. About this position, I feel qualified for the job for I am outgoing. I get on well with others and am skilled at organizing many activities.①If I might be the vice president, I will try my best to help the president and serve my fellow students.②I will try my best to improve our English and make more students interested in English.③I intend to organize some activities like lectures, English parties, English speech contests etc.
I sincerely hope that you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good vice president.
Thank you.
名师点评
1.第一段的第二句、第三句连续使用２个简单句，且缺乏连贯性；about改为concerning更出彩，此处改为：Concerning this position, I feel quite qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting along well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities.更好, 语气更强。
2. ①中用If I am lucky enough…比If I might be…更含蓄，且assist比help表达更高级，故此处可改为：If I am lucky enough to be the vice president, I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students.
3. ②此处，I will try my best to与上文重复，句式太单调，spare no effort to do sth.与try one’s best to do sth. 意义相近，避免重复且表达更高级，改为：I will spare no effort to improve our English and make more students interested in English.
4. ③此处表达比较平淡，且用于举例时使用such as比like更地道，改为：Ihad the intention of organizing some activities,such as lectures, English parties, English speech contests. 更好，使用同位语从句和高级词汇表达，语气更强。这样结尾上下文更加连贯自然，起到画龙点睛的作用。
1.第一段的第二句、第三句连续使用２个简单句，且缺乏连贯性；about改为concerning更出彩，此处改为：Concerning this position, I feel quite qualified for the job because I am outgoing, getting along well with others, and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities.更好, 语气更强。
2. ①中用If I am lucky enough…比If I might be…更含蓄，且assist比help表达更高级，故此处可改为：If I am lucky enough to be the vice president, I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students.
3. ②此处，I will try my best to与上文重复，句式太单调，spare no effort to do sth.与try one’s best to do sth. 意义相近，避免重复且表达更高级，改为：I will spare no effort to improve our English and make more students interested in English.
4. ③此处表达比较平淡，且用于举例时使用such as比like更地道，改为：Ihad the intention of organizing some activities,such as lectures, English parties, English speech contests. 更好，使用同位语从句和高级词汇表达，语气更强。这样结尾上下文更加连贯自然，起到画龙点睛的作用。
满分作文背诵
Good afternoon, my dear friends.My name is Li jin. Today I am honored to have the opportunity to run for the vice president of the English Club. I believe I am qualified to take the job. First, I am outgoing and getting along well with others. Second, I am good at organizing activities and have already gained much experience.
Were I the vice president fortunately, I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students. On the one hand, I will give you a platform to show your English. And I will invite some famous professors to give lectures so that you can acquire plenty of knowledge. On the other hand, I will organize more activities like debate contest and speech contests to strengthen the interschool communication. Moreover, I will open more channels for you to voice your opinions.
I sincerely hope that you will give me a chance to do something for you.
Thank you.
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